My favorite room in the Little Sister house is obviously the gym, i mean, how do you think i get my body this perfect? I wanted it to be bigger but one of the women said that it needed to be smaller. I only accepted because i am a very nice guy. I would have preferred a bigger bar and gym but, eh, you can't get everything in life.
*Make sure you always use a capital letter for 'I'.
ReplyDeleteWell done this demonstrates creativity and you have included some explanation of your character's ideas. To get a higher grade you could have just developed this description to include some more detail. 5/8 Criteria C